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hey, i wrote some song lyrics... im thinking of making it a journal if people like it... lol still looking for a good band name...... got a couple in mind...
(keep in mind this is heavy metal)


Kill My Mind~


Then what is our purpose in life?
Falling into this void,
OF NOTHING!
RESCUE ME!!!
Show me a PURPOSE!!!
This is what we were made for,
Our DESTINY!

This world with all it's FILTH!
AND NOISE!!!
I can't STAND IT!!!
YOU!!!
You are the only thing that makes any Sense...
STAY WITH ME!!!
You help the Noise, GO AWAY!!!

They Spew DEATH!
And DESTRUCTION!!!
I will Never listen to their LIES!!!
THIS IS THE NIGHT CORRUPTION DIES!!!

Why is it so hard to SEE,
with these BLIND EYES!
HEAL ME!!! HEAL MY SIGHT!!!
HEAL ME, AND HELP ME FIGHT!!!
STAY WITH ME BY MY SIDE!!!

TAKE MY LIFE!!!
I'M SO BLIND!
TAKE IT ALL!!!
KILL!!! MY!!! MIND!!!

I could see this being an amazing post-hardcore or punk screamo song.
do anyone give feedback here?(: just wondering.. could use some constructive criticism(:
ok will visit ur page XD
haha woo! ur amaziing!